L.I: I can write imaginative pieces that use detail and descriptive language.
One of my first one hundred word challenges: "I can't believe my sister is making me do this," I grumbled walking outside. So, my sister just turned seven so she's done with her Barbies so we "have" to have a funeral for them, I guess. I grab a large plant pot from our shed and put the Barbies in head first. In the corner of my eye I see my sister running out of the house bawling her eyes out. My mom, my sister and I say a few words goodbye. Then, my mom puts the pot in the shed and we all go back in the house.
My most recent one hundred word challenge: I had just finished my trick-or-treating and was heading past the Night Zoo and I decided to see the newest animal they put in. When I saw the sign I assumed that they had made a mistake with the name; it had said “Creature unidentified.” But then, a horrifying creature came out, with eyes as white as snow and horns sharper than knives. It was crying but then realization came in that it wasn't crying normal tears. It was sobbing blood. It started wailing again and my eyes grew wide as I ran away from this creature from hell.
What I've learned from my first 100 WC to my most recent is that it's better to add more than leave the reader hanging by not putting in enough detail and description.
One of my first one hundred word challenges: "I can't believe my sister is making me do this," I grumbled walking outside. So, my sister just turned seven so she's done with her Barbies so we "have" to have a funeral for them, I guess. I grab a large plant pot from our shed and put the Barbies in head first. In the corner of my eye I see my sister running out of the house bawling her eyes out. My mom, my sister and I say a few words goodbye. Then, my mom puts the pot in the shed and we all go back in the house.
My most recent one hundred word challenge: I had just finished my trick-or-treating and was heading past the Night Zoo and I decided to see the newest animal they put in. When I saw the sign I assumed that they had made a mistake with the name; it had said “Creature unidentified.” But then, a horrifying creature came out, with eyes as white as snow and horns sharper than knives. It was crying but then realization came in that it wasn't crying normal tears. It was sobbing blood. It started wailing again and my eyes grew wide as I ran away from this creature from hell.
What I've learned from my first 100 WC to my most recent is that it's better to add more than leave the reader hanging by not putting in enough detail and description.